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So I'm actively writing on three things at once. Yay. Anyway, I was scrawling away this morning and wrote this, literally:

"Quelle domage dommage," Draco said, not sounding at all sorry. [question for flist]

My question was this: This story is from Ron's POV, third person limited. Ron doesn't know word one of French, except perhaps 'merde' or something equally appropriate. Is it acceptable for me to have Draco sound not at all sorry if Ron doesn't know the meaning of the phrase 'quel dommage'? It means "What a pity," and Draco's being sarcastic. But if this is Ron's POV, and I put that there, it seems to imply that he'd have an inkling of the meaning of the phrase. I guess I'm uncertain as to how much leniency I have within third-person limited POV and the way Draco's saying that versus Ron's understanding of what Draco said. I mean, I know this is splitting hairs and most people would just gloss over it, but I'm really quite unsure as to where third person limited starts and stops, sometimes. The obvious stuff is obvious, but something like this— I just don't know. Anyone? [livejournal.com profile] fabularasa, I suspect you'd know in a nanosecond. But I welcome anyone's theories and knowledge.

I'm writing this weekend. ::grins:: And our local library actually had a copy of Who Killed the Electric Car, so I'll be watching that with my parents later on tonight. Apparently I could also use a nap as I keep yawning. It's too bloody hot and sunny, too. Yuck. I suppose it is the end of August in the northern hemisphere, however, and I shouldn't be surprised. Mowing the lawn won't happen until tomorrow, that's for sure.

Hope you all are having a good weekend!

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Date: 2007-08-25 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lena3.livejournal.com
I can't help you at all with the POV, but...oh, Who Killed the Electric Car! That docu gets me every time and especially embarrasses me cause it happened in my state! My green, recycle-conscious, has electric stations and people who use them, state!

*cries*

I got your note and will email you this weekend. Thank you, sweets. ♥

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Date: 2007-08-25 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
It's okay, sweetie! Your state is a very complicated, heavily-populated one that's practically several countries. :P

Glad you got my little letter! I just love sitting down and writing to you, in a chair, with my stationery in my lap. ♥

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Date: 2007-08-25 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lena3.livejournal.com
It's okay, sweetie! Your state is a very complicated, heavily-populated one that's practically several countries. :P

Yes! This makes me feel better because now that I think about it, it's my *county* that is...green, recycle-conscious, and has electric stations that people use!

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