Wee beta request

[thrihyrne]

I have a not-quite 1100 word Dwarf-centric story that I'd love another set of eyes on. This is short and prompt-driven and hopefully won't take more than 15 minutes of your time…

Any takers?

Comments

[booneda.livejournal.com]

Are you looking for a general beta, or someone who knows the world extensively or something in between?
'Cause I'll offer my services if you just need someone to double check the language and the "Does this make sense?" stuff. (It's been forever since I read any Tolkien.)

[thrihyrne.livejournal.com]

Oh, this so general beta and 'I realize this is somewhat cractastic, but it's still Tolkienesque.'

Do you mind giving me an email where I could submit this to you?

[booneda.livejournal.com]

booneda@aol.com

[brumeux77.livejournal.com]

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