thrihyrne: Portland, OR (Bagoas Alexander kiss by mrbnatural)
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Back when I was between stories a couple of weeks ago, I asked for prompts and have written nearly all of them. [livejournal.com profile] persephone100 asked for an Alexander/Bagoas story, and this is what I came up with. It's not a reuniting after Alexander's on campaign, but it is a short intimate time between them. I'd also hoped for this to be included in the Five Years On Mary Renault Fics challenge, but posting isn't until the 12th, and I've already made Seph wait for this. But perhaps it can be included after the fact.

Title: Sogdian Nights
Fandom: The Persian Boy
Pairing: Alexander/Bagoas
Rating: R (not explicit)


Alexander was in good spirits; he and Hephaistion had spent all of their evening together by the fire, sharing common tales of their youth. Perhaps it was the winter and lack of other entertainment that brought on such stories, or the wine I poured at Alexander's request— though I made certain to keep the water jug close at hand. It eased my spirit to see him drink of both equally until Hephaistion made noises to go.

"You could stay," Alexander said, his kindly voice cutting me to the quick. How could I bear it if he stayed and I was asked to go out into the cold? The nights had been mine…

Hephaistion clasped Alexander on the shoulder and kissed him on both cheeks. "I could, and I thank you, but you have business in the morning, and I would indulge myself in a long sleep. With all that I have, good night to you."

He raised himself up from the skin rugs, and shooed me away when I made my way to open the trap door to let him down.

"Tell him a story." Hephaistion's voice carried up the rope as I hastily shut the door, hearing Peritas shuffle and whine until Alexander gave him the attention he felt he deserved.

"Yes, a story, Bagoas. Something from your own childhood, unless that pains you to speak of that time."

Alexander's cheeks were flushed, and I could tell it was a combination of heats that burned in him. Something short, then; I would take some of that flame into myself as soon as I could.

"Of course, Al'skander. There's a story of five pomegranate trees, and the five dragons who guard them…"

I told the tale, though an abbreviated version as I could tell he had other ways to pass the time on his mind. His fingers played with my hem; his fingers seared against my thigh, hot and inviting.

"Oh Al'skander," I sighed, removing my tunic in as elegant a fashion as I could, though my desire to please him caused my hands to tremble.

"Are you cold?" he asked, his eyebrows knit in concern.

"No. You are all the warmth I need."

He smiled at me with such tenderness I felt tears prick my eyes. Soon, however, I was engaged in caresses and possessive kisses that might even have made Oromedon blush. Alexander was fire, and when he filled me, I felt as though I were a god myself, taken willingly by the sun. I urged him with all of my skills, but always the giver, he reached around to take me in his hand. I gasped, and then the tears did come as he said my name, again and again until he spent. His fingers tormented me until I, too, was racked with pleasure, my body shuddering with my completion. He gently uncoupled us and I fell into his arms, decorating his face and neck with kisses, pressing my wet face against his hot skin.

"Bagoas?" he asked worriedly. "Did I hurt you?"

I shook my head, appalled that he could consider such a thing.

"No, no," I murmured, clutching him to me, wishing that I could crawl into his heart and stay there forever. "You could never hurt me, Al'skander."

Even as I said the words, I thought to the months when he was gone on campaign and doubtless Hephaistion kept him company, and knew I had spoken an untruth.

"You are shaking," he said softly, pulling me close to his chest. "We should get in bed. Peritas, up!"

The air in the room was frigid. I quickly took a cloth to clean myself, and soon we were lying together under the skins. His body was a torch. At the foot of the bed, Peritas curled up in a ball, whuffing as he settled into a comfortable position.

"Another time you shall tell me more of your people's fables," he said, brushing a kiss against my temple. "But for now, let us sleep."

"Yes, Al'skander," I said, kissing the ridge of his collarbone and snuggling against his side. Wrapped in the bower of his arms, I fell into a dreamless sleep.

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Date: 2009-06-09 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stuckinsea.livejournal.com
I swear, Thev it's like I'm reading something Mary Renault wrote herself. I love how you can just basically picked up a piece where Mary left off if she was writing this scene. Wonderful, you have such a talent. Thank you for writing this.

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Date: 2009-06-09 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
Oh my. :blush: You're so kind to me! There's something about her style that I find really challenging to emulate, so for you to say that is so gratifying. Thank you for reading it and for your kind words!!

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Date: 2009-06-09 07:24 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] liriaen.livejournal.com
What a lovely, lovely thing to wake up to! And *points to [livejournal.com profile] stuckinsea* - she's right!

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Date: 2009-06-09 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
Oh yay! Thank you so much; writing Persian Boy fic is a challenge for me, but I'm pleased this turned out as it did. Short and sweet. ;)

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Date: 2009-06-09 09:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] haldoor.livejournal.com
Agreed! Very spot on! And beautiful. *sigh* thanks for sharing it with us!

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Date: 2009-06-09 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
Many thanks! Happy to share, especially when people are so enthusiastic. :)

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Date: 2009-06-09 11:31 am (UTC)

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Date: 2009-06-09 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
Thank you! Mary Renault's writing in TPB is so exquisite; it's hard for me to analyze, but I enjoy dabbling in that world.

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Date: 2009-06-09 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brumeux77.livejournal.com
I believe I bought The Persian Boy and never opened it. If it's a patch on what you've written here, I'd better go find it.

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Date: 2009-06-09 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
Oh, if you've not read it, you're in for a treat! I've not actually read it; I've listened to it as a book on tape twice, though thanks to [livejournal.com profile] persephone100, I do now have my own copy. I must also guide you to an incredible story by [livejournal.com profile] elfscribe5, Oromedon's Lessons (http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=12658). Renault's writing is marvelous, and she brings Alexander and that time in history and the world so vividly to life. Highly, highly recommended.

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Date: 2009-06-09 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] persephone100.livejournal.com
I'm so sorry that I couldn't read this earlier, but RL has been unbelievably busy. This is gorgeous! I agree, it's Mary Ranault, it's perfect, exquisite and one of the loveliest and beautiful things I've ever read, truly! <3 I absolutely ADORE it. I especially loved (besides the hot parts ;)) "...wishing that I could crawl into his heart and stay there forever." And I so loved the last two sentences. I'm printing this elegant vignette and putting it aside to read over and over. Thank you, SO much. I knew it would be great, but this is even more than I ever expected. Just the BEST!! Thank you, Luv!

p.s. A long email is coming your way!

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Date: 2009-06-09 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com
I'm blushing furiously!! I'd wanted to write you something longer, and more explicit, but I just couldn't do it and stick with what sounded like Renault's language. I'm just so pleased that you're so happy with it. Writing Bagoas allows my inner romantic (because there is one, a wee one!) to express herself.

You're welcome, of course! I'll look forward to your email. I'm now writing a bunch of stories at once and am getting pulled in so many directions- it's a bit overwhelming! Glad that my work hours are the way they are. ♥

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Date: 2009-06-10 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] two-point.livejournal.com
Your scenes are always so perfectly well written, the tone fitting the mood, the subject, the actions. And your language, as everyone above has said much better than I, suits Renault while still being uniquely your own. What a delicious scene to read after a very long, dusty day. I hope you're enjoying your new house and breaking the garden in with your notebook.

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