"Wash Me Throughly"- true Ron/Remus version

[thrihyrne]

This may not interest anyone but matildabishop, but I'd felt badly that my Ron/Remus story for her ended up going Remus/Severus to accomodate snottygrrl's story. No-one's fault other than the author, of course. At any rate, I spent some time in January revamping the ending and adding to it. This version is now properly Ron/Remus, there's a bit more smut, and an unexpected bit of magical theory that I'll probably end up incorporating in another story.

I'm just going to provide the link to the story on my website: if you've read the first version and don't feel like rereading the first 10 pages, the changes occur at the point when Remus is washing and cutting Ron's hair. I wrote Severus out of it and let Ron and Remus figure out their attraction on their own. With the new and improved skyehawke, modifying it over there should be relatively painless.

Wash Me Throughly, version 2

Comments

[celandineb.livejournal.com]

I liked the revised version! :-) Not that I don't like Remus/Severus, but I felt badly for Ron in the original.

[thrihyrne.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you! I felt badly for him, too, though life's like that. And I put Draco out there as a possibility. ;) I'm glad you like this version; I've a really positive experience reworking it. The problem is that it, too, begs a continuation. :sigh:

[celandineb.livejournal.com]

Well, almost any story can be continued (unless everyone is killed off!), but that doesn't mean it has to be... and some shouldn't be. Don't feel obliged on this, certainly!

Besides, I'm still looking forward to the R/D... whenever that is done!