New fic: "Strife from the Furthest Prime"

[thrihyrne]

My triatha_ron fic has been posted, and it's here. Since it's out of my usual realm, at least partially pairing-wise, the summary is below to let you know what it's about:

Title: Strife from the Furthest Prime
Prompt: Red
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Bill/Ron, Ron/Harry
Warnings: Incest; AU (post-War); Angst
Length: 10,700
Summary: Qua cursum ventus: the course lies as the wind blows. In a post-apocalyptic, post-War world, Ron and Bill are survivors, hidden in the Burrow. When Harry unexpectedly appears, the winds of change prove devastating.

If you do read it, let me know what you think! It's a bit dark, psychologically bleak, and the characters' sanity may be relative and ambiguous. If you're on my flist and not into my adult HP fic, skip on by.

Comments

[lena3.livejournal.com]

Thanks for linking to this. I want to read it when I get the chance. For some reason whenever I try to go over to triatha_ron, my computer has a stroke. It still took a bit to load this time, too. *sighs* Thank you! :)

[thrihyrne.livejournal.com]

Hey there! No problem; sorry that the comm is being odd. I really should go and read more of the fics over there, but I started out so far behind I'm not sure what I'll do. I don't know that I'll vote since I missed days 1-10. :(

It's dark and Weasleycesty before it gets to H/R, and I'm afraid that poor Ron does get rather abused, psychologically. Just so you know. ::loves on you for considering reading it::

[lena3.livejournal.com]

Finally got to this!

Yikes.

Poor Ron. Between two very disturbed people whom he loves so much. And dear Ron, thinking that everyone getting along would actually work. Almost never does.

His past, his naïveté, his capacity for hope— all had been incinerated in the burning, ravenous Muggle apocalypse that had consumed so much of England.

Nah, he still had it to a degree. Because he's Ron. And the ending, whether consciously or not that comfort is better than confortation. Yep.

I'm afraid that poor Ron does get rather abused, psychologically. Just so you know.

Thanks for the warning, but I was okay. This time! :)

[thrihyrne.livejournal.com]

Poor Ron. Between two very disturbed people whom he loves so much. And dear Ron, thinking that everyone getting along would actually work. Almost never does.

Yes, and I really had wanted that, too! I'd been envisioning a threesome, but no— blasted Harry would have none of that. I'm glad that the story wasn't too disturbing. I really do appreciate you reading it! The setting and ambiance to it is rather different from what I tend to write, but I'm proud of how it turned out.

[fellanuwua.livejournal.com]

Wow, that was fretfully delicious, I enjoyed much!

[thrihyrne.livejournal.com]

Oooh, 'fretfully delicious.' What a great description! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it.

[fellanuwua.livejournal.com]

No prob!

[honor74.livejournal.com]

Beautiful but with sharp edges, cut me to the quick. You did a tremendous job of projecting a dark and lonely atmosphere. Now I'm going to go get some kleenex.

[thrihyrne.livejournal.com]

Beautiful but with sharp edges, cut me to the quick. You did a tremendous job of projecting a dark and lonely atmosphere. Now I'm going to go get some kleenex.

Thank you so very much!! I'm so grateful for people's comments; given the Weasleycest element as well as the content, I figured it wouldn't get a whole lot of reads, but people who have given it a go seem to be drawn into the atmosphere I worked hard at, so that makes me feel pretty good. *And* exceedingly thankful for my betas!!

Will call/email you soon; my comp's still dead, so I'm having to borrow my stepdad's (which is usually between 11 p.m. and 3 a.m.) plus more job hunting while working part-time, phone is wonky/half-dead, etc. etc. :P

At any rate, thank you very much for your review!!

[honor74.livejournal.com]

The incest doesn't bother me; I enjoyed a fair few twincest works. And let's face it, if you were one of two people left on earth (or the Wizarding World), and the other person was a sibling, they'd probably start looking really good. Plus the whole familiarity thing; you'd grab on with both hands to keep from losing any more.

Looking forward to phone or email. I'll be at work 'til 5, which is 6 your time, but will be gone again to a function at my daughter's school.