Oh yes!! Thank you, thank you. That was marvelous! And it was definitely Yves/Bran with a side of Holden. Perfect! I loved the idea of the song form and the evolution of Yves' feelings for Bran. It was lovely and emotional as well as truly hot. Many great turns of phrase, among them I especially loved: "He wiped at his mouth, the gesture unintentionally sexy. the moon looks chewed up, as though the gods were hungry. Yves felt the unspoken countdown of Holden's orgasm." I think the ending with Yves'desire to have both of them at once is the first time I've seen double penetration as more than kinky sex play. Instead, it was an emotional declaration of Yves' affection for both men. Thanks hon!
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Date: 2009-10-22 05:22 am (UTC)Many great turns of phrase, among them I especially loved:
"He wiped at his mouth, the gesture unintentionally sexy.
the moon looks chewed up, as though the gods were hungry.
Yves felt the unspoken countdown of Holden's orgasm."
I think the ending with Yves'desire to have both of them at once is the first time I've seen double penetration as more than kinky sex play. Instead, it was an emotional declaration of Yves' affection for both men. Thanks hon!