*deep sigh* I love the ending to this story! Of course I'd always wished for Vaysh and Ash to find to one another again somehow, but I also fancy tragic things... And this is something in between, so I have to like it!! At least they talk to each other, and although they'll probably never be together again they could be something like nearly-friends some time in the future... Who knows? There is this uncertainty left which makes me be somehow relieved and melancholy at the same time. A delicious effect *grins*! It is sad and wistful but at the same time there is something like as if Vaysh has found some tiny little bit of peace with all of it. Not that he'd be happy ever after with the situation now, but in a strange way he seems even a little bit stronger than Ashmael. I feel pity with Ash in a way, and yet I'd like to slap him in the face, too. At last I think he'd need some healing, but maybe he's actually really over it in his own weird way? Anyway, this is really touching. Who doesn't know this strange feeling when you meet a once beloved person and it's all over now but you're still aware that this is the one you knew so very well in every sense and vice versa, and then you can hardly talk to each other, just as if you were strangers now... For Vaysh it must be even worse as they hadn't parted hating each other or so. And still Ash reacts like this, no matter if it's a wee little bit understandable. *sigh* Yet there is some hope left... Thanx for that :-) Now I'll be able to sleep again *lol* I can't wait for you to write something new, with whatever characters you choose. (((HUGS)))
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Date: 2008-05-07 08:06 pm (UTC)I love the ending to this story! Of course I'd always wished for Vaysh and Ash to find to one another again somehow, but I also fancy tragic things...
And this is something in between, so I have to like it!!
At least they talk to each other, and although they'll probably never be together again they could be something like nearly-friends some time in the future... Who knows? There is this uncertainty left which makes me be somehow relieved and melancholy at the same time. A delicious effect *grins*!
It is sad and wistful but at the same time there is something like as if Vaysh has found some tiny little bit of peace with all of it. Not that he'd be happy ever after with the situation now, but in a strange way he seems even a little bit stronger than Ashmael.
I feel pity with Ash in a way, and yet I'd like to slap him in the face, too. At last I think he'd need some healing, but maybe he's actually really over it in his own weird way?
Anyway, this is really touching. Who doesn't know this strange feeling when you meet a once beloved person and it's all over now but you're still aware that this is the one you knew so very well in every sense and vice versa, and then you can hardly talk to each other, just as if you were strangers now...
For Vaysh it must be even worse as they hadn't parted hating each other or so. And still Ash reacts like this, no matter if it's a wee little bit understandable. *sigh*
Yet there is some hope left... Thanx for that :-) Now I'll be able to sleep again *lol*
I can't wait for you to write something new, with whatever characters you choose.
(((HUGS)))