*hugs-hugs-hugs* This was sooo beautiful again! I love it! And it gave me the possibility to catch some breath, at least ;-) Not that there hadn´t been enough parts where you could mourn for poor Vaysh. But this time you´ve painted a somehow quite pleasant scene with all the things like Thorn´s and Jaffa´s music or the pearl or Vaysh being into that bazaar. It could all be so perfect if there wasn´t this always itching hint of melancholy. I guess this is the calm before the storm or something, am I right? Next time I´ll probably need tissues again (and I don´t want to *tremble*). I have to join into the comments above about your beautiful phrases like that one with "I bled myrrh"... That´s stunning. You´re a striking author. By the way - I´m busy with reading and enjoying M&M. I like it, too, very much. Hope you´ll never stop writing Wraeththu stories :-)
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Date: 2008-04-15 04:24 am (UTC)This was sooo beautiful again! I love it!
And it gave me the possibility to catch some breath, at least ;-) Not that there hadn´t been enough parts where you could mourn for poor Vaysh. But this time you´ve painted a somehow quite pleasant scene with all the things like Thorn´s and Jaffa´s music or the pearl or Vaysh being into that bazaar. It could all be so perfect if there wasn´t this always itching hint of melancholy. I guess this is the calm before the storm or something, am I right? Next time I´ll probably need tissues again (and I don´t want to *tremble*).
I have to join into the comments above about your beautiful phrases like that one with "I bled myrrh"... That´s stunning. You´re a striking author.
By the way - I´m busy with reading and enjoying M&M. I like it, too, very much.
Hope you´ll never stop writing Wraeththu stories :-)