I'm so pleased that it came across as shockingly unexpected! I spent an inordinate amount of time trying to figure out how he could die where there was a lot of blood (since Ashmael mentions the smell of Vaysh's blood) without it being a nearly-100% parallel to Pellaz/Cal. Having been in an ice storm myself, this fit the bill.
I'm so gratified that you read this, truly, especially since I'm a new author to the Wraeththu community.
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Date: 2008-03-09 06:13 pm (UTC)I'm so pleased that it came across as shockingly unexpected! I spent an inordinate amount of time trying to figure out how he could die where there was a lot of blood (since Ashmael mentions the smell of Vaysh's blood) without it being a nearly-100% parallel to Pellaz/Cal. Having been in an ice storm myself, this fit the bill.
I'm so gratified that you read this, truly, especially since I'm a new author to the Wraeththu community.