Another wonderful Ash/Vaysh aruna, beautifully described. And yes, Arahal in turquoise leather and Velaxis in anything are both droolworthy.
Yes, I do like the sense of foreboding that Ash has everytime Vaysh and Thiede are together.
I love your descriptions of the surroundings. I get such good visuals from this. Some more stuff that I liked especially: e picked up a piece of pickled beetroot and popped it into his mouth, his fingertips stained purple. I needed an anchor— instead, he shared breath again and I was further, hopelessly lost. a confection of black leather and silver chains That was fucking unbelievable!" Vaysh exclaimed, his eyes mad with euphoria From my childhood religious upbringing, I had a keen sense of being in the Garden of Eden, before the snake had appeared, before knowledge had been consumed. Vaysh and I were walking in the lands with a Creator, out in the dusky gloaming of the day; he loved us, and he would have us be at his side in his new Paradise.
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Date: 2008-03-19 07:16 am (UTC)Yes, I do like the sense of foreboding that Ash has everytime Vaysh and Thiede are together.
I love your descriptions of the surroundings. I get such good visuals from this.
Some more stuff that I liked especially:
e picked up a piece of pickled beetroot and popped it into his mouth, his fingertips stained purple.
I needed an anchor— instead, he shared breath again and I was further, hopelessly lost.
a confection of black leather and silver chains
That was fucking unbelievable!" Vaysh exclaimed, his eyes mad with euphoria
From my childhood religious upbringing, I had a keen sense of being in the Garden of Eden, before the snake had appeared, before knowledge had been consumed. Vaysh and I were walking in the lands with a Creator, out in the dusky gloaming of the day; he loved us, and he would have us be at his side in his new Paradise.