Came here by way of raythoo and wow this is absolutely fabulous. Vaysh and Ashmael so needed a gapfiller fic. I'm sorry to have popped in mid-way and need to go back and read earlier. But I'm liking this a lot. Your writing is evocative, full of wonderful language and visuals. Your characterizations good. I like the idea of a 3-some marriage. Why not in the Wraeththu world? I also like the sense of politics I'm reading here and your attention to canon details. And your aruna scene - very sensuous. I'm writing a Wraeththu fic right now too, and I also have a scene in which one of my characters has aruna as both ouana and soume. I always thought, why not if one could? If you are both genders, why hold at all to any form of rigid roles? Anyway, so glad you did this.
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Date: 2008-02-19 07:52 pm (UTC)