just read it all at once (like AHD!). your writing wars with my work schedule quite regularly, though this is completely fine by me because your writing is much more captivating than writing grant applications...
really liked the way you engaged the dwarf/elf traits with such nuance and control. I was a bit confused about the "he/she" thing with Narvi, thinking that perhaps it was just dwarf smithing culture that all artisans were referred to as "he". All clear now and a highly affecting ending.
With weight of exquisite memory, the quill touched the paper, deftly marking short lines and cross-hatchings, giving angular voice to such liquid song.
my favourite sentence (and its mirror as well). favourite scene is when Gimli gives Legolas the silver cuff - a scene with such depth and resonance of the themes within the story. off to make a coffee and return to mundanities now...sigh...
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Date: 2004-03-18 12:43 am (UTC)just read it all at once (like AHD!). your writing wars with my work schedule quite regularly, though this is completely fine by me because your writing is much more captivating than writing grant applications...
really liked the way you engaged the dwarf/elf traits with such nuance and control. I was a bit confused about the "he/she" thing with Narvi, thinking that perhaps it was just dwarf smithing culture that all artisans were referred to as "he". All clear now and a highly affecting ending.
With weight of exquisite memory, the quill touched the paper, deftly marking short lines and cross-hatchings, giving angular voice to such liquid song.
my favourite sentence (and its mirror as well). favourite scene is when Gimli gives Legolas the silver cuff - a scene with such depth and resonance of the themes within the story. off to make a coffee and return to mundanities now...sigh...