Okay, before I try to give a thoughtful comment, I gotta mention that you're probably the only fan writer I know whose characters actually use the bathroom regularly. It's such a small thing but it gives an extra bit of realism and normalcy that I appreciate.
Also where is Hermione? I find it odd that she never shows up. Is she fighting for House Elf rights in obscure parts of Europe? ^^;
Anyway, this fic had me grinning all the way through. I really enjoyed it. Your character development is rather nice and subtle and it makes sense for the characters. I'm in love with your Draco and your Ron. The circumstances around the Malfoy family situation is really nicely done. And I love the idea of Japanese Wizards being a bit more techy. It makes sense.
I'm so going to stop gushing now. Good job! And now that I'm done with your wonderfully distracting fic, I'm going to be productive. :D
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Date: 2008-11-27 10:21 pm (UTC)Also where is Hermione? I find it odd that she never shows up. Is she fighting for House Elf rights in obscure parts of Europe? ^^;
Anyway, this fic had me grinning all the way through. I really enjoyed it. Your character development is rather nice and subtle and it makes sense for the characters. I'm in love with your Draco and your Ron. The circumstances around the Malfoy family situation is really nicely done. And I love the idea of Japanese Wizards being a bit more techy. It makes sense.
I'm so going to stop gushing now. Good job! And now that I'm done with your wonderfully distracting fic, I'm going to be productive. :D