You managed to convey so much in so few words. It had the feel of a much longer piece. You covered quite a lot of ground; so many details that it should have felt rushed and busy. But it didn't. Nothing jarred as the story flowed almost inexorably to its logical conclusion with an unhurried, almost leisurely feel that I can only attribute to the quality of the writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it.
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Date: 2007-08-01 01:09 pm (UTC)