You're very kind to me!! Thanks for listening to me read it aloud yesterday; your commentary and reading it ended up helping me with it tremendously.
I think even this resolution is a bit on the tidy side, but they seem to have gone through not insurmountable odds in order to find their true soul's desire. In fact, I didn't get that point across as well as I'd've liked: it was that they both pursued their heart's desires first, but ultimately it was their spirits which needed to be heeded.
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Date: 2007-07-30 09:58 pm (UTC)I think even this resolution is a bit on the tidy side, but they seem to have gone through not insurmountable odds in order to find their true soul's desire. In fact, I didn't get that point across as well as I'd've liked: it was that they both pursued their heart's desires first, but ultimately it was their spirits which needed to be heeded.
(((grateful hugs)))