Utterly beautiful wordcraft, as always. It is a slight departure from your usual style, but NOT AT ALL cracky!
I love your Hermione...and Harry, so broken. Yes, perhaps they're all a bit too scarred. And you handle everyone respectfully, matter of factly, even. So very realistic, also.
I enjoy the flow of it, slowly but surely moving toward a conclusion entirely more palatable than the novel.
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Date: 2007-07-30 04:43 pm (UTC)I love your Hermione...and Harry, so broken. Yes, perhaps they're all a bit too scarred. And you handle everyone respectfully, matter of factly, even. So very realistic, also.
I enjoy the flow of it, slowly but surely moving toward a conclusion entirely more palatable than the novel.
Excellent!