I think she needed a good editor. And unlike Tolkien (whom she was clearly copying/inspired by), she was under huge pressure to have an Epic Finale. Alas, she isn't up to it, and it showed IMHO.
I also didn't like the frigidity in certain scenes and in regard to certain characters. Bad writing and bad editing.
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Date: 2007-07-22 05:40 pm (UTC)I also didn't like the frigidity in certain scenes and in regard to certain characters. Bad writing and bad editing.