Aw, loved the picture that Harry took and gave them. He's a good friend.
When Seamus suddenly said that Fred had invited them, I blinked a few times; that felt pretty abrupt, but you explained what was going on quickly enough that it was okay. Not necessary to give every detail in chronological order, after all. *g*
Seamus puttering with Seth is so cute. Wonder if he's ever heard of Sirius' motorbike? The three-way interaction, with Dean jealous, Fred both wanting and trying not to get in the way, and Seamus trying to figure out how to prevent explosions, was nicely complicated and snarly. [One little thing -- you say Seamus pouted until Dean waved him over? How'd Dean know he was pouting?]
I liked how Seamus remembers bits about Fred at not-terribly-opportune moments (the long hair, when he's just noticed Fred's growing it out again) but doesn't freak out about it. And Dean being turned on by the flying... even if it was with Fred. I think that worked well as a lead-in for future forgiveness by Dean; not just being aroused but Dean asking and Fred agreeing to take him flying since Seamus isn't much good at it.
Most enjoyable as always! [Okay, no Dean icon, you get Lee instead!]
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Date: 2007-06-29 01:56 pm (UTC)When Seamus suddenly said that Fred had invited them, I blinked a few times; that felt pretty abrupt, but you explained what was going on quickly enough that it was okay. Not necessary to give every detail in chronological order, after all. *g*
Seamus puttering with Seth is so cute. Wonder if he's ever heard of Sirius' motorbike? The three-way interaction, with Dean jealous, Fred both wanting and trying not to get in the way, and Seamus trying to figure out how to prevent explosions, was nicely complicated and snarly. [One little thing -- you say Seamus pouted until Dean waved him over? How'd Dean know he was pouting?]
I liked how Seamus remembers bits about Fred at not-terribly-opportune moments (the long hair, when he's just noticed Fred's growing it out again) but doesn't freak out about it. And Dean being turned on by the flying... even if it was with Fred. I think that worked well as a lead-in for future forgiveness by Dean; not just being aroused but Dean asking and Fred agreeing to take him flying since Seamus isn't much good at it.
Most enjoyable as always! [Okay, no Dean icon, you get Lee instead!]