Wee beta request

I have a very short (1100 words) R/D pre-slash story that could use a set of eyes. Any takers? Thanks in advance!

Happy birthday, eldritchhobbit!!

It's so hard to believe that we've been friends for several years now. Were it not for you, I wouldn't have discovered fanfiction, and due to that and our co-creation of the Lómelindi, I have met dozens of wonderful friends. I remain forever grateful for the time back in the day when we could meet for coffee and you were so supportive of my initial writings. I have so much to be grateful for in regards to you and our friendship, and I hope you have an absolutely WONDERFUL day today. Let the celebrations begin!

Much love,

Thev