you know i am always honored to beta for you if you want....
and this is lovely, adore the switch between horny!moony to war!moony to angst!moony, nicely done.
It’s a banner day, and all he’s done is managed not to shag Sirius senseless quite yet and gone off to work. Not bad for eight-thirty, considering.
He’s almost forgotten how the expression transforms Sirius’ already handsome face to positively devastating.
It’s simply too much and he barely makes it to the toilet before he vomits, bashing his ankle into the upper edge of the tub in his haste. His muscles contract again and again as he expels what little food he’s eaten until he’s wilted over the bowl as the dry heaving subsides.
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regna
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Date: 2004-09-27 01:08 pm (UTC)and this is lovely, adore the switch between horny!moony to war!moony to angst!moony, nicely done.
It’s a banner day, and all he’s done is managed not to shag Sirius senseless quite yet and gone off to work. Not bad for eight-thirty, considering.
He’s almost forgotten how the expression transforms Sirius’ already handsome face to positively devastating.
It’s simply too much and he barely makes it to the toilet before he vomits, bashing his ankle into the upper edge of the tub in his haste. His muscles contract again and again as he expels what little food he’s eaten until he’s wilted over the bowl as the dry heaving subsides.
simply brill. truly.
[*wibble*] ♥