That was really well written. I've never read a fic that linked the episodes together with scent before, and it's very effective. And the scenes are all nicely chosen from their life together and apart.
As he choked back tears, surrendering to his own orgasm, Remus cursed fate by chanting Sirius' name over and over in benediction.
Such a beautiful line!
This nice a fic deserves better formatting; you're right. You can just edit this entry and fix it manually in the edit window. I think it would be worth it - it shouldn't take you too long. The spacing is a bit distracting as it is now.
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Date: 2004-07-11 02:49 am (UTC)As he choked back tears, surrendering to his own orgasm, Remus cursed fate by chanting Sirius' name over and over in benediction.
Such a beautiful line!
This nice a fic deserves better formatting; you're right. You can just edit this entry and fix it manually in the edit window. I think it would be worth it - it shouldn't take you too long. The spacing is a bit distracting as it is now.