Thank you for your comments; I may end up tweaking it thanks to your attention to the details of the words, especially the nuances of the Dwarf/Elf interaction ones. I'll need to go back to The Hobbit, as the Elves of Mirkwood are decidedly less refined than their southern neighbors. They had plenty of criticisms for Thorin & company! As far as I can tell, until Gimli was in Rivendell, the only experience with Elves he would have had would have been those of Mirkwood, and his father's comments about how he was treated by them. ;)
Again, thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave some astute concrit.
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Date: 2006-04-28 01:04 pm (UTC)Again, thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave some astute concrit.