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Thrihyrne ([personal profile] thrihyrne) wrote2004-07-10 05:54 pm

'The Essence of Black'


This one's for [livejournal.com profile] llembas. Began it months ago, it was abandoned, and then was finished up today. Do enjoy, though it does have a high angst content. It makes me cry, and I'm the author. It's R/S, in case you're wondering.

<--- hopeless

(off to go write hot, non-angsty smut for Romanticalgirl and Licia_North)

Yet again, it's easier just to divert you to my website. The Essence of Black

[identity profile] llembas.livejournal.com 2004-07-11 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
You finished it! Yay! And it's so so angsty and good. And I love your talent for writing descriptions. This one in particular is perfection:

Remus lay behind Sirius, their intersecting angles of arms and thighs, knees and wrists, toes to
socked feet creating a unique geometric figure impossible to map even by an expert in Arithmancy.



[identity profile] thrihyrne.livejournal.com 2004-07-11 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad you like. :) And that you appreciated that sentence. I'm actually rather proud of this one and the descriptions, and for going back and finishing it, making Remus a bit more book!Remus than Kristi!Remus. There are some interesting images in the descriptions for this, and I'm thrilled that you picked up on them. It is rather high angst, but oh well. You know it's coming. I think my favorite bit is about "Tainted Love" and it being his valiant for truth. And the sandbar. I'm such a description junkie.

Did you get the package I sent you before you went to MD? If not, it'll be there for you upon arrival. Big 'ol beta. ;)