Skin | Nightmare | G

[thrihyrne]

Title: Nightmare
Author: Thevina
Prompt: Skin
Rating: G
A/N: Magic Immunity universe

Ron woke up, totally discombobulated and thrown out of a dream he'd had that was so vivid he was still shaking. He'd never been in a Muggle aeroplane, and yet, the one he'd just been in had crashed, though he'd survived. As his breathing slowed, it slowly registered that he had two hands full: one bunched at the sheets, the other grasping claw-like at Draco's downy chest hair.

"Wake up," Draco said groggily, a warm palm fingering Ron's fist. "It's okay. You're alright, Ron. Hold me."

The relief shuddered through Ron as he spooned against Draco's skin, unrelenting and real.

Comments

[celandineb.livejournal.com]

I like the tactile imagery here, very well done. Do you dream Ron's dreams?

[maple-mahogany.livejournal.com]

You know I'm a stick in the mud about this ship, hee, but you write it so well. :)

I like that Draco said "hold me" rather than "let me hold you" (which is what I'd expect to see in a Harry/Ron maybe) But that stood out to me. Nice touch.

Nightmare

[koshweasley.livejournal.com]

Bravo. I love this, the nightmare, Draco and the spooning. Well done!

[wolfiekins.livejournal.com]

Such a wonderfully surreal moment for Ron...clutching/clinging to his love, hovering on the edges of consciousness. And I like Draco's reaction here...so Draco! Lovely!