I love your musings. They are so thoughtful and interesting!

Thank you! I don't know that I mean to be that way, this really did just come to mind because of something I was beta'ing, but I'm glad to inspire others to share their thoughts.

I truly don't mind the paragraph break shifting POV because I can see it there. Now, that being said, I'm now realizing that I've done the multiple POV thing three times, not two (I keep remembering more stories :facepalm:) and in one of them I didn't immediately identify the speaker and my beta got on to me about it. "I read these first three paragraphs and I didn't know who the hell it was!" she said. So I think, all in all, be kind to your reader and even if you're breaking the rules, it'll be okay.

I'm not the greatest writer in the world, I write for fun and enjoyment,

Hey! No self-deprecation! None of us are the best. I'm glad that you write and I appreciate your comments here. :)