ext_7183 ([identity profile] anna-wing.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2006-09-23 03:23 am (UTC)

As with most other literary techniques, I think a lot depends upon the skill with which a POV shift is done. But generally a shift in mid-paragraph in an otherwise straightforward piece of prose will be read (by me, anyway) as clumsiness rather than intent.

I'm all for omniscience myself.

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