beautiful honey. i can really feel her impatience and frustration. fabulously done.

Thank you so much- and yes, your beta is definitely of some use. I can't believe the Fred & George mistake! ACK! And I'll think about the alliterative names… I don't mean for them to be annoying. But yes, your beta was most helpful, even if not line by line.

And I'd love some other recs; I'm determined not to stay up too late tonight, but I wouldn't mind some more reading.

(((hugs)))