geoviki ([identity profile] geoviki.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2004-11-05 09:51 pm (UTC)

Oh, this is great! There's been such a dearth of new fic in general, and to get some hurt/comfort H/D (my fav!) is such a treat...

You obviously need more H/D friends.

Loved! : Raising the Wand- Impotence in the Wizarding Community

I also loved the reunited scene where Harry finally tracks Draco down and the short, terse conversation they have.

I liked that all Harry's parchments have his title on them

Liked this exchange:
“Right,” Seamus sniffed, then took a long pull from his newly-delivered pint. “Don’t think I can stand you.”

“Nor I you,” Draco said, placing the triangle over the balls on the table. “Let’s play.”


And I really enjoy all the visual phrases you toss in there, like: stretched out on Draco like a dog on shady ground. You have many many more that I can't even quote them all...

Before I lose the bookmark, here's an edit or two:

the "nutters" quote is incorrect, which I recently learned from [livejournal.com profile] mad_martha here

you could allow we healers - should be allow us healers

And an obscure remnant from my French-taking days: blonde is the feminine form. Narcissa is blonde. Draco is blond.


Anyway, I really like this fic. I love fics with plot, which you've done justice to, and fics with happy endings. *sigh*

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