as always, the dialogue crackles off the page

I can't tell you how much that means to me!! llembas was always my person to try and impress, dialogue-wise, when I wasn't nearly as good at it, but knowing that you think my dialogue 'crackles off the page' makes me so very pleased. Hope that the twinfic update does the same for you! Thanks so much for your comments; I'm glad that you thought the Seamus bits were funny and that you thought Draco was believable. I don't think I'll ever attempt to write from Harry's POV again, but once was fun.

Glad you like the "burnt honey" phrase. :)