Yeah, because you know I'd really hate that. [not] I don't know that I've ever had this much feedback at once, aside from "Essence of Black." It must resonate with a lot of folk- scary to think that by getting in Snape's head I'm writing something that sucks people in. ;)
this is a really great character vignette for Severus, even without the rest of the story attached
Many thanks for that. I do think it's the strongest one, but I think I'll post them all together at skyehawke so the effect of their intertwining needs/lives are all there.
Severus walked over and, surprising himself, ran his fingers through Lupin’s greying hair, from temple to neck. “Everyone is addicted to something. I’m sure death will cure it, though.” *dies* That is my favorite. Every word of that is hardcore poignancy. You're the wizard.
*blush* I guess I thought everybody thought that way.
And I guess I'm your wizard, since you proposed! Oh, whoops, I forgot to accept. I would be happy to be your handfasted partner. We can drool over Jason Isaacs and write together in companionable silence and I'll braid your hair.
Re: *Li proposes marriage... again*
*bows in gratitude*
but I don't want to drown you with repetition.
Yeah, because you know I'd really hate that. [not] I don't know that I've ever had this much feedback at once, aside from "Essence of Black." It must resonate with a lot of folk- scary to think that by getting in Snape's head I'm writing something that sucks people in. ;)
this is a really great character vignette for Severus, even without the rest of the story attached
Many thanks for that. I do think it's the strongest one, but I think I'll post them all together at skyehawke so the effect of their intertwining needs/lives are all there.
Severus walked over and, surprising himself, ran his fingers through Lupin’s greying hair, from temple to neck. “Everyone is addicted to something. I’m sure death will cure it, though.”
*dies* That is my favorite. Every word of that is hardcore poignancy. You're the wizard.
*blush* I guess I thought everybody thought that way.
And I guess I'm your wizard, since you proposed! Oh, whoops, I forgot to accept. I would be happy to be your handfasted partner. We can drool over Jason Isaacs and write together in companionable silence and I'll braid your hair.
If you want.