ext_64430 ([identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2004-09-07 05:41 am (UTC)

they are all fabulous, but i love this one the most. despite the fact that i'd rather have snape get some happiness. but this version is so v. right. [*wants to pat snape on the head and give him (((hugs)))*]

you do great angst, grrl. lovely descriptions liked
Two second years in his House suffered the misfortune of becoming unintentional flotsam, one eking out a question before the Potions Master cast back such an acerbic reply that even the foliage in a nearby portrait wilted.
and
The glass shattered, a combination of accidental wandless magic and Severus’s now uncontrolled fury and loss. He watched his blood drip on the floor, making an intricate pattern with the glass shards and small stain of liquor.
oh, and too many more - the bit about being useful until proven dead breaks my heart, and i laughed outloud at the bit about behavior of Potter/Lupin/Fudge/Voldemort/insert-hysterically-irritating-or-deadly-personage here
and....oh...i have to stop...
it is really wonderfully written, you should be so proud...
((((hugs))))

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