Thank you for your kind words!! Verisimilitude. I'd not thought of that word in some time, and I'm thrilled that it came to mind to you for this story.

The one she's translating is "Strife from the Furthest Prime, written for triatharon back in 2007. If you're a member you can read it there (http://community.livejournal.com/triatha_ron/16222.html) or it's here (http://thrihyrne.net/Furthest_Prime.html) at my website. I'll be interested in your thoughts! I'm quite proud of it, though with the incest, the dystopia, and questionable sanity, it was a bit much for some folks. But a lot of people were really moved by it. ♥