http://persephone100.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] persephone100.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2009-07-03 04:17 am (UTC)

OMG! This was more than beautiful!!

Two of my favorite parts were:

"Her hand squeezed gently and he felt off-balance, as though standing on sand as the waves came in, pulling the world out from under his feet" EXQUISITE!

Also:

"Andrei," Lee said slowly as though Andrei's name was an exotic dish to be savored on his tongue." AWESOME!

Actually I'd probably have to reprint the whole thing to tell you my favorite parts! This particular story just stuck me!

It's just so lovely and perfect. And I don't even know the whole background of the fandom, yet!

I can see why you said Andrei came to you and said you had to write this.

I'm glad he did! (and that you responded!)


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