I'm so very grateful for your beta, my dear; and thank you also for commenting here! I really fell for Onthéon as well; I realized that that name didn't come from nowhere, I'd had an Onthéon in my first long Tolkien story, set in Rohan. But I like this one better!!

I have Elfscribe to thank for her take on the twins, and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the story. :) ♥