ext_12484 ([identity profile] ennorwen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2009-02-18 10:22 am (UTC)

Oh, this is so delicious, I can hardly stand it -

First of all, I appreciate your respect for Rohan and it's people. It's clear that you really love and know ie., have a feeling for it - your names are magnificent and I really quite enjoyed that it was set in Brego's time. (Yep, the minute I read that I said, ooooh, Baldor! - kind of gave me the shivers.)

And your twins are a delight - their slow and knowing seduction is so well synchronized - and their care and gentleness with dear Ontheon was touching. Loved that they gave him confidence and his due by using the many names that they did. And I really liked the whole coiling serpent/python metaphor for orgasm. Unique and true.

Manly sex. Oh yeah. & Ontheon's ending remark is priceless.

Absolutely should be compiled with "Swan Prince," in an anthology titled, "The Brothers Elrondion Fuck Their Way Across Middle-earth."

Absolutely delightful - & timely, in a weird way - the hubs had us watch a movie called "The Thirteenth Warrior" the night before. Eh. Not a great movie at all, but it took place in a very Rohirric (or I should probably really say Rohan was very Norse) type of place - it even had its' own Meduseld and the horses carved in the hall, & a lot of it reminded me of Rohan.

Again, I really liked your names, too. Interesting enough, a long time ago in an Aragorn/Legolas piece I wrote, I used the name Torannroch (brother-gift-horse) for Aragorn's steed. A gift from Elrohir.

I'm sure Elfscribe loves this. I know I did.




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