http://persephone100.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] persephone100.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2008-04-14 05:26 pm (UTC)

Wow! This whole post was enchanting and beautiful. So many poetic and layered images you created. Especially the aruna scene. Though it was definitely descriptive and delightful, I also felt that the participants had a sense of awe and a reverence for the sacredness of creating a pearl. Very lovely!

I also thought the part where Vaysh holds the harling is so perfect. It's just how you feel when you have a child.

I do ache for Vaysh sometimes. He wants to be happy for his friends, and I'm sure he is, but his heartbreak is just so deep.

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