Finally, the ending that should have been!
JKR's epilogue left me with a rather bitter taste in my mouth.
Something was just off about it.
The way you've rewritten the ending - really - everything IS well, or as good as it can be really, after all those deaths. :)
I am glad you didn't ignore R/Hr, or H/G, as much as I abhor the idea of Harry and Ginny together. Like in life these things need to be respected, and I think you did respect everyone.