You're very generous... it's an unintentionally affected style, writing-wise, because of the challenge and that I didn't want to spend 20 pages getting there. :) Primarily I wanted to respect the H/G and R/Hr relationships, but show that sometimes things just don't go as you expect. As a divorcee and having been quite cruelly dumped by a parmour, I know how that goes.
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this! JKR's epilogue really gave me fits to the point I wasn't sure I'd write HP again, but this has helped me to cleanse my writerly palate. ;)
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it has a kind of hushed feel to it.
You're very generous... it's an unintentionally affected style, writing-wise, because of the challenge and that I didn't want to spend 20 pages getting there. :) Primarily I wanted to respect the H/G and R/Hr relationships, but show that sometimes things just don't go as you expect. As a divorcee and having been quite cruelly dumped by a parmour, I know how that goes.
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this! JKR's epilogue really gave me fits to the point I wasn't sure I'd write HP again, but this has helped me to cleanse my writerly palate. ;)