ext_57406 ([identity profile] wolfiekins.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2007-07-22 01:38 am (UTC)

Mo chuisle mo chroĆ­ = the pulse of my heart

I just love that quote from FWtW!!!

So glad we finally get to The Cleansweep...I feel as though I know it well, although from another 'verse! I love all the little details, like George juggling, and mentions of the Green Knights. Poor Seamus, though, on his emotional roller-coaster. He's so torn between what he has and what he wants. And Fred...not only is he canon stocky (woof!), but I really like him...easy-going and thoughtful, and still clearly smitten with Seamus. Loved the scene on the stairs...the descriptions of the flood of emotions (and blood!) were spot on.

And of course the sex is so very hot...slightly awkward, but not overly so. I really liked Fred pointing out how possessive BOTH Seamus and Dean are, and that being in a three-way relationship doesn't always mean all three get off at the same time...very true, and I love your Fred all the more.

So much to enjoy here...a marvelous, satisfying story, luv! Bravo!


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