Yeah, Harry's a pretty good guy in this; Ron, too. I hadn't meant for the invitation to be abrupt— that one sentence was to cover a wee bit of time. :) I don't think that Seamus knows about Sirius and the motorbike, nor pensieves, since he wasn't in Harry's inner circle. Hence why it's fun to drop them in about his thoughts about them since they exist, but he doesn't know it!

That one element you pointed out- probably could be tweaked. I guess I thought that Dean would be able to intuit what Seamus was doing from having known him so long, but if it sounds as though he could see him, that's a problem. Thatnk you for pointing it out.

I'm glad the the little flashes of Fred make sense; I've been trying for the physical remembrances to be there for Seamus so it explains some of his rekindled/still existing affections for Fred. The flying was definitely necessary for those two to have some solo time so that Dean's mistrust can slowly be broken down.

And I love your Lee icon!! :) I'll need to make a threesome icon for these three here pretty soon.
(((hugs))) and thanks for reading.