telperion1 ([identity profile] telperion1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thrihyrne 2007-07-01 08:32 pm (UTC)

Oh, Thev, this was delightfully wicked and most definitely hott. I'll admit that [livejournal.com profile] celandineb was my introduction to HP fanfic, and so my default way of thinking about Draco's sex life usually involves Harry, possibly with a side of Snape. But that doesn't mean I can't enjoy other possibilities. Such as this obviously.

What I love about your Ron is that he is by no means inferior to Draco. Not that he is, but Draco is just so refined and so suave.... And even in his canonical friendship with Harry and Hermione, Hermione is Mensa material and Harry is the fated savior of all wizardkind, so even though he's solid and decent and pretty good in his own way, it's easy for him not to shine. But notso in your story. He is sure of himself and eloquent and in charge of his own actions and even of Draco's (though not in a domineering way).

Oh, and two quick sidenotes: somehow Latin titles just make everything cooler. And this piece becomes even more wicked hott if you read it while listening to the soundtrack of Ocean's Thirteen. Just sayin'....

I did have a little bit of a hard time following the blocking in a few places, but I think that's me being a bit hot and bothered. That gives me an excuse to go reread it one of these days, I think. Or maybe someone could draw a few sketches.... *evil grin*

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