Oh, what a wonderful sequence in the park! Lovely visuals of the boys naked amongst the hedgerows and trees and grass...I love the description of the sky...clouds moving across the sun. Very stimulating sex, too. Brilliant! And the visit with Fred...you capture the storm of emotions in Seamus perfectly. Once one has loved another, it's difficult to shut those feelings down or ignore them. I especially enjoyed how Seamus' anger would rise and fall like the swelling of a restless sea...and poor Fred...yeah, he was an arse, but he was clearly overwhelmed. And Seamus, now conflicted, buying that lovely massage oil for Dean...but still thinking of Fred.

So intricate and in-depth...so very real, too. I'm very much enjoying this!