Ohhh. I didn't expect to get another installment so soon!
I really liked the way you wrote the scene with Seamus and Dean making love; there's a poignant irony in having that happen outdoors, in broad daylight, when Dean can't see or appreciate the view.
And Fred, obviously conflicted; it's not yet quite clear to me what's going on in his head, despite what he says to Seamus. He seems both aware that Seamus has no reason to go back to him (both as a result of Fred's own actions, and b/c he's now with Dean) and yet there are still hints of that old cockiness and surety that if he just asks, Seamus will come back. Interesting.
*laughing* at lazy Seamus, watching the soaps and eating dark chocolate. Hee. Nice to see his weaknesses.
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I really liked the way you wrote the scene with Seamus and Dean making love; there's a poignant irony in having that happen outdoors, in broad daylight, when Dean can't see or appreciate the view.
And Fred, obviously conflicted; it's not yet quite clear to me what's going on in his head, despite what he says to Seamus. He seems both aware that Seamus has no reason to go back to him (both as a result of Fred's own actions, and b/c he's now with Dean) and yet there are still hints of that old cockiness and surety that if he just asks, Seamus will come back. Interesting.
*laughing* at lazy Seamus, watching the soaps and eating dark chocolate. Hee. Nice to see his weaknesses.
Listen to your dreams, Seamus... *g*