now have something to think about as i walk into town....

Usually images like that make me want to stay home. ;)

the small kitchen was filled with panting men and stifling sex.

nicely done

Thank you. I can't resist putting in some imagery, no matter how short. So glad that it worked for you.

I beta'ed your story today- very interesting premise, I must say. Glad you're moving forward with it!

-K